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Paulette Bodeman's avatar

Thank you for sharing this poignant story.

Alla Keselman's avatar

Thank you very much for reading it!

Marcello Iori's avatar

the detail that carries everything: the child who doesn't fully understand what's happening but knows he needs his cap, the cap that belonged to his brothers before him, the cortège that leaves without him. This is what Hemingway meant. Not economy of style. Economy of trust in the reader.